Tuesday, 30 March 2021

poetry slam!

 Hi bloggers it's me so for writing we got to choose free writing poetry slam and this is my poetry slam it was so fun to do.

3 comments:

  1. Tino pai Brax. Wow, I wasn't expecting that ending! I like the way you read your poem nice and clearly in a good quiet spot. Maybe you could add your Google Drawing to your blog post so we can see your words more clearly? What else did you learn during sea week?

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  2. Kia ora Brax Ka pai on you work mabe next next you could work on having a clear voice more and it will be amazing im so exctied to see more about

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  3. hi my name is luke it was good mabey plan abit more it was good tho i liked it.

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